[C+C] Candlelight

[CountingStars]

The Study is startin' up with a bang this month!

Title: Candlelight
Background: I steal Magix's background. A thought came up with an RP. Common ground?
Work:

Remember what I told you
That night long ago
I said that I would have to leave
I said that I would go
So today I stand here
And remember that night
Remember the candle I gave you
Remember how it burned so bright
But don’t worry my dear
It won’t be for long
Just remember me, my dear
And it won’t feel so wrong
And if the flame dies out
Before I return
Just remember all the times we had
Feel the candles burn

[BBMG]

I give that a 9!
That's great, star! Only thing I would have changed would be maybe a little repetitive thing in the middle, like you did with Amiss(which was 10 btw). You know what I'm saying, right? I don't sound crazy?

[Sorcer]

Very pretty. Because it is short, and I see no errors... 10.

[Digit]

Beautiful. *claps* 10.

[Sarah Baby!]

Lovely little thing, Starry. I'd give it a 9. I agree with BBMG for the repetitive thingamajig, but that's really a matter of opinion there. Keep up the good work, I wanna see more from you.