[C+C] A Simple Love Poem

[DreamFighter]

Title:A Simple Love Poem
Backround: I was reading a lovey-dovey tihng, and it inspired this.
Work:

A Simple Love Poem

Spinning we go,

Around in this darkness,

It surrounds us tightly.



In our circle,

We watch the stars,

Waiting for the sun to rise.



In the fields,

Of golden grass swaying,

Where our songs are being sung.



Heart stunned,

Mind lost,

In this puddle here.



It has a name,

Below the surface there,

I call it love.

[Colour]

Pretty. I'd say a 9.

[Sarah Baby!]

9. It's hard to explain critiqing for poetry. It more of a poetic license thing.